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Chepseh Featured By Owner Edited Mar 13, 2017
After reading through the comic I would like to leave a little comment, too:

Well, what can I say, to me this looks really like a work of love and passion. I salute to you for creating a whole own world with uber-detailed page after page, for telling the story in a slow pace instead of serving quick cheap thrills, for the pretty unique character design and for avoiding so far many clichees one would expect (or, rather, it seems to me you are playing with clichees only to give them a new direction then).
Personally I didn't even mind your former handwriting font and could read it just fine-! But the new one is good as well. I think I also read you are somewhat unhappy with the beginning now? That's a well-known phenomena amongst artists who work on a longer series, if this is any consolation...! Or maybe that's a consolation: As a first time reader from chapter 1 to chapter 4 I didn't think at all: "Woah, the beginning sucked but now it's finally getting better." or anything like that.

It's a pity that some of the pages get so few comments. But then, this seems to be sadly the fate of many comics which work with original characters and which don't offer slash galore or other "goodies" that draw fans by the dozen. Big kudos for sticking to your own vision.

Any criticsm? Hm, during moments where many people are talking I had sometimes the problem to find out who says what - because the tails of the speech bubbles are so super-slim. And in the action scenes I absolutely appreciate your unusual camera angles, but sometimes they made it difficult for me to understand what exactly is going on - mainly during the fight on the roof and the fight with the werewolves. But those things were never thaaat severe.

I am very much looking forward to your updates, and if TTB becomes ever a printed version in English or German I would even buy it.
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WhiteFoxCub Featured By Owner Edited Mar 14, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Hello! Aw man, I can't tell you how much I appreciate this kinda feedback. You know, it really helps to get an outside opinion, for the clarity. 

I definitely have issues with this comic, the beginning parts especially (yup, you have that info correct) Mainly because I've improved quite a bit in my storytelling, and my perspective/personal taste has developed. It used to be very difficult for me to move on with the comic; when there was a ton of regret burdening me. But I've since learned to forgive myself, I've accepted it's been like one great, big learning experience. And I'm glad people have been able to enjoy it for what it is, at least. 

I'm doing the best I can, and it certainly helps to have your support and encouragement along the way. Thank you for taking the time to read the entire comic thus far! There's quite the bulk in pages now, a number which I assume tends to put people off.. So it means a lot that you've managed it! 

TTB certainly is a passion project for me, and I have many more stories I'd like to get out as well. I'll be honest; it has been tough continuing the work when it seems as though the readership is shrinking, rather than growing. It used to tear me apart, I thought my content was just plain crap, but I think it is mostly due to the "originality", like you said. And I appreciate you acknowledging that. I do like to follow my own nose as best I can ;u; And dude, I never realised how easy it was to fall into cliche traps, haha! 

As for a printed version- I do actually have a publication for it, but it'll be translated in French, haha :iconsweatplz: Hopefully someday in English! Depending on how things go..

Thank you once more for your critique :hug: And for your reassurance, your comment has made a positive impact on me today, and I can't thank you enough for that :heart: As I continue to work on this comic, it makes the journey more doable knowing I have you on board!
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Chepseh Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
"I'll be honest; it has been tough continuing the work when it seems as though the readership is shrinking, rather than growing."

I saw similar complaints from quite a few other profilic artists here. Personally I think it's just the effect of devart having lost some of its status, it's not as "hip" as it used to be. Quite a lot artists l liked very much moved mostly or completely to other places, especially tumblr and then instagram. :(
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brittoniawhite Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is it! I finally have time to binge read your beautiful comic i have been so longingly craving to read since you announced publishing! I can't wait! :iconpapcryplz:
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WhiteFoxCub Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
:iconoldschoolownedplz: :heart:!!
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brittoniawhite Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Eonfox Featured By Owner Edited Oct 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm in love with your style. The lines look so free and looks fun to draw. I found this the other day while out and about only got marginally through due to travel. Time to read the rest!
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sandflake-adoptables Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Student Digital Artist
your comic is simply breath-taking... such a wonderful and whispy line style, coupled with coloring that is smooth as fog just hhhhhh

plus your characters are so alive, classy, and memorable ;v;
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WhiteFoxCub Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
HAhhhhthankyousomuch ; A ; :heart: I am in constant worry that I am making the wrong choices in my storytelling, I read another comic today that was filled with suspense and intrigue, I binge read it and afterwards I wondered if my comic had the same effect? It is hard to tell since I KNOW what occurs in the story. 

Your message encourages me to continue, thank you again :heart: ;; 
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indigo-98 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic is fricken glorious. I am in love with the style and the colors!!
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WhiteFoxCub Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
This is an unforgivably late reply but I wanted to say thank you ;; :heart: 
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indigo-98 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome! I forgive you ;)
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Bonnino Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
wow, i mean, your style is so beautiful and the character design is just perfect...the quality of detail is so high in every page...stunning
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CreativeNight Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student General Artist
this comic is really cool so far. very nice mood and atmosphere. I think you could sell this if you wanted. I would buy if I had the money.Love 
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Split-Heart Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I WANT TO FAV THIS WHOLE FREAKING FOLDER!! DA!!! MAKE IT HAPPEN! NOW!
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superjaegar-aviator Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ps, if you go back to the TTB Gallery, and drag the comic folder up, you can put it in your favorites, just like any single devation >u>
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Split-Heart Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm... I think DA hates me. (won't let me do it)
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superjaegar-aviator Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no! I'm not sure what else then ; H ; I'm sorry friend!
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Split-Heart Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No worry, I do not blame your failure... I blame DA.
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Split-Heart Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AH! I KNEW there was a way! Thanks, you fantastic creature! * v  *
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Forgess Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
I am thoroughly enjoying this nearly neoclassical style you have incorporated into this beautiful comic. Absolutely astounding work. 
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WhiteFoxCub Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you.. so much ;; :heart: 
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Forgess Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
You are very welcome! :heart: Will you be putting these to print?
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